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by John Sargent
August 11th, 2018, 11:09 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Bars for Kids
Replies: 1
Views: 367

Re: Bars for Kids

The second verse could be about this kid, Barron. His mother is an immigrant that lied about her education on her visa application to get in the US. Then she got into a sham marriage with a US citizen so she could stay. Now his grand parents got in the US and have become citizens via the "Chain migr...
by John Sargent
August 9th, 2018, 4:40 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Bars for Kids
Replies: 1
Views: 367

Bars for Kids

I am old enough to remember Presidential candidates having commercials with songs, and or jingles. "I like Ike" promoted Eisenhower in the 50's. "High Hopes" sung by Frank Sinatra was the song for JFK. I'm hoping that President Trump will consider this for his re-election campaign. This tune would ...
by John Sargent
August 2nd, 2018, 7:41 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added

https://youtu.be/kXbg-XZ3Rv4

I did add a new verse and also did some lyric tweaks. I wonder if this song has commercial value.
by John Sargent
July 12th, 2018, 1:57 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added

I've decided to drop those new verses because they stray from the beard topic. The first verse last line now reads "I'm gonna grow it down to here" I suspect that "Sears" may not be long for this world. Second line of second verse I'm changing "fur" to "white" as it is a better descriptor of the San...
by John Sargent
July 12th, 2018, 1:51 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added

Thanks. I don't go for very professional sound or images in my recordings. Once things are polished a bit I enjoy playing them live.
by John Sargent
July 12th, 2018, 1:50 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: In the mirror of my bedroom (with lyrics below the video)
Replies: 2
Views: 797

Re: In the mirror of my bedroom (with lyrics below the video)

Interesting. Thanks for posting the lyrics. Very nice sound.
by John Sargent
July 10th, 2018, 7:41 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added

The song was too short so I added a few new verses Santa Claus Beard I want a Santa Claus (I) beard It’s what I (V) really want to grow It’ll be (V7) white as the snow Not one that (I) you can buy from Sears (pause) I want a bright red (I) suit With a lot of fur (V) trim on the collar and hat Don’t ...
by John Sargent
July 7th, 2018, 3:23 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard with final edit and video

Thanks Chefie, that means a lot to me
by John Sargent
July 7th, 2018, 4:09 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard with final edit and video

It turns out that is NOT the final edit. I've got some more work to do to rearrange verses and then make a better recording
by John Sargent
July 6th, 2018, 12:17 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard with final edit and video

https://youtu.be/ZOAZepsU1Gg Santa Claus Beard I want a Santa Claus (I) beard It’s what I (V) really want to grow It’ll be (V7) white as the snow Not one that (I) you can buy from Sears (pause) I want a bright red (I) suit With a lot of fur (V) trim on the collar and hat Don’t want to (V7) look too ...
by John Sargent
July 6th, 2018, 6:12 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: The shadows of the others
Replies: 2
Views: 784

Re: The shadows of the others

Have you considered posting your lyrics? I like the guitar playing a lot but really hate autotune on voices.
by John Sargent
July 6th, 2018, 5:41 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Re: Santa Claus Beard

I woke up, did an edit , and added an ending and a chord structure. Comments are welcome: Santa Claus Beard I want a Santa Clause (I) beard It’s what I (V) really want to grow It’ll be (V7) white as the snow Not one that (I) you can buy from Sears (pause) I want a bright red (I) suit With a lot of f...
by John Sargent
July 5th, 2018, 10:19 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Santa Claus Beard - new verses added
Replies: 10
Views: 1522

Santa Claus Beard - new verses added

It is 1:15 AM. I woke up in the middle of the night. It's one of those "sleep writing" songs. Ill review it in the morning I want a Santa Clause beard It’s what I really want to grow It’ll be white as the snow Not one that you can buy from Sears I want a bright red suit With a lot of fur trim on the...
by John Sargent
July 3rd, 2018, 8:48 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: The Marijuana Farmer
Replies: 1
Views: 651

Re: The Marijuana Farmer

https://youtu.be/LJlYBE9DfP4 Revised lyrics: The Marijuana Farmer One summer I tried growing marijuana In a garden behind my home A perfect spot for growing pot I thought I had everything I’d need I used the kids toy box for a planter Filled it with dirt seed and water Got a grow light and knew I mi...
by John Sargent
July 1st, 2018, 5:20 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Tus besos
Replies: 2
Views: 988

Re: Tus besos

I just listened to several of your songs. Your team is certainly prolific. Are you performing your songs live?