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by Celt
March 2nd, 2016, 12:23 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y14 w17 Only One Eye?
Replies: 3
Views: 1463

Re: Y14 w17 Only One Eye?

Like Renee said "Points for creativity"

Dark subject. Not often you hear a song about cannibalism.

The only criticism is it could a bridge or something to break it up some
but otherwise Good Job.

John
by Celt
February 18th, 2016, 11:53 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Weeks 15 & 16 Anywhere (You Want To Be)
Replies: 2
Views: 1193

Re: Year 14 Weeks 15 & 16 Anywhere (You Want To Be)

Neil,

Thanks. You are correct the lines you mention are a bit cliche but to me
they work off the line about sounding like some old country song. Espesially
Rings of fire.

John
by Celt
February 15th, 2016, 2:44 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Weeks 15 & 16 Anywhere (You Want To Be)
Replies: 2
Views: 1193

Year 14 Weeks 15 & 16 Anywhere (You Want To Be)

Couldn't come up with anything more than a title last week so I used it this week. Found it interesting that this assignment forced me to work out the music first as I usually work both together or lyrics first. Anyways that drunken 3am phone call nobody wants to get from their ex: http://soundclick...
by Celt
February 15th, 2016, 4:37 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues MP3 Added
Replies: 7
Views: 1908

Re: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues MP3 Added

Thank You, Neil

John
by Celt
February 14th, 2016, 11:32 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y14W15 - Somewhere
Replies: 2
Views: 1137

Re: Y14W15 - Somewhere

Not much to say but Wow!

Great Job

John
by Celt
February 7th, 2016, 7:55 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues MP3 Added
Replies: 7
Views: 1908

Re: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues

Hobson wrote: universal appeal.
I like that! I had an on the road musician in mind but it could be a long haul trucker or
anybody who has to travel for work.

Thanks

John
by Celt
February 7th, 2016, 7:50 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y14W13 - If I Had a Year
Replies: 6
Views: 1737

Re: Y14W13 - If I Had a Year

Hobson wrote:But writing it was cathartic.
Yes it can be.
by Celt
February 7th, 2016, 7:48 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y14W13 If...Please
Replies: 4
Views: 1501

Re: Y14W13 If...Please

Wow I never thought of the spiritual aspect of it.
Interesting take on the subject.
by Celt
February 6th, 2016, 11:48 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues MP3 Added
Replies: 7
Views: 1908

Re: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues

Thanks Neil

I like the edit better too but wanted to leave the original up because it came together
so fast and during a very busy time. The changes are minor but I think they make for a
better song.

John
by Celt
February 3rd, 2016, 3:55 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues MP3 Added
Replies: 7
Views: 1908

Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues MP3 Added

This song was written after and during short shopping trip making and eating supper running a grandson to basketball and back home before going to work a TV show at our local access. Hence the title MP3 now on SoundClick http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13314591 Downtime Blues I need some downtime...
by Celt
February 3rd, 2016, 12:46 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y14W13 - If I Had a Year
Replies: 6
Views: 1737

Re: Y14W13 - If I Had a Year

I may not be the right person to critique this song. I lost two dear friends to pancreatic cancer so the subject is close to my heart. That said I like it. At first I had the same feeling about the last two lines but on further thought they make sense. If life is a song then the final verse must be ...
by Celt
February 1st, 2016, 6:43 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y14W13 If...Please
Replies: 4
Views: 1501

Re: Y14W13 If...Please

I like the minimalist approach to the lyrics. The minor pentatonic should give it a good feel to go along with the yearning feel of the lyrics. The last line: " I'd be someone It seems out of place. I would suggest you stay closer to the pleading feel of the rest of the song and just end it with som...
by Celt
February 1st, 2016, 6:24 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Week 13 If I Were A KIng
Replies: 3
Views: 1306

Re: Year 14 Week 13 If I Were A KIng

OOPS Double Post
by Celt
February 1st, 2016, 6:24 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Week 13 If I Were A KIng
Replies: 3
Views: 1306

Re: Year 14 Week 13 If I Were A KIng

Thanks Renee, Magdalene refers to the Biblical Mary Magdalene or more so to the Legendary character as much of what is believed about her in popular culture is not Biblical. The "haunted my dreams" actually came out of another idea I was working on so it may be out of place here. I could change that...
by Celt
January 28th, 2016, 1:30 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 14 Week 13 If I Were A KIng
Replies: 3
Views: 1306

Year 14 Week 13 If I Were A KIng

No Recording this week.Still working out some issues with the new setup. If I Were A King She told me her stories of hearts how they break And I sang her a song about love's give and take And when we finished the smoke and drank most the wine She kissed me and said “ All I ask is your time” Her touc...