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by BarnaBus RoX
February 10th, 2014, 1:24 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Week 15 Who Knew ( Very Rough Draft )
Replies: 5
Views: 1581

Re: Week 15 Who Knew ( Very Rough Draft )

Hey Paul , You got me thinking with that added line , maybe I could add to this with the narrator actually becoming a school teacher . Just messing about with it at the moment taking David's edits on board and now that has my ol brain working over time :) Cheers Trev.. 8) :note1: :note2: :note2: :no...
by BarnaBus RoX
February 9th, 2014, 6:09 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Week 15 Who Knew ( Very Rough Draft )
Replies: 5
Views: 1581

Re: Week 15 Who Knew ( Very Rough Draft )

Hey David - Thank you kindly for reviewing this , I like what your saying , I agree it does need to be a lil more active where you outlined :) I am liking this option " When every Monday came We would be dragging our feet Heads would hit the desks and we'd fall asleep An every week seemed the same "...
by BarnaBus RoX
February 9th, 2014, 2:18 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Week 15 Who Knew ( Very Rough Draft )
Replies: 5
Views: 1581

Week 15 Who Knew ( Very Rough Draft )

In the 70's we were all crazy That's when I met my girl She'd make , my toes curl Other memories a lil hazey Went to the same school We had different friends We'd meet up at schools end Never real bad , just bending the rules We would party hard Every Saturday Night Havin fun I was a card Who knew !...
by BarnaBus RoX
February 9th, 2014, 1:48 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Year 12 - Week 14 - Dances with Ghosts - Take-2
Replies: 13
Views: 2814

Re: Year 12 - Week 14 - Dances with Ghosts - Take-2

Hello Roy :) I personally like the " Vanished in thin air " but I suppose it depends on how you sing this , I started reading it and ended up singing it in my head with this up tempo happy sort of melody happening . I love the chorus / Pre Chorus and the Bridge ( they really jumped out at me ) , the...
by BarnaBus RoX
February 9th, 2014, 1:37 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG Year 12 Week 14
Replies: 9
Views: 1826

Re: SSG Year 12 Week 14

Hi David Before I give a reply to your song , I have a small request , :) Can you cut your hands off and send them to me ? I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to play a guitar like you :D :D Once again I prefer to listen to how you guys an girls meld music and words together , something I struggle with . The ton...
by BarnaBus RoX
February 9th, 2014, 1:24 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG12 - Week14 - Dancing with Ghosts - mp3 added
Replies: 19
Views: 3916

Re: SSG12 - Week14 - Dancing with Ghosts - mp3 added

Hey Paul :) When I 1 st read the lyrics I will admit I was not a fan , the words with longer syllables just wasn't working for me , but I took that in and wanted to hear how you fitted them into music before replying . Well ! Well ! Well ! While we had breakfast this morning , The wife and your neph...
by BarnaBus RoX
February 1st, 2014, 3:28 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language
Replies: 18
Views: 4131

Re: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language

Like I said I won't be letting 1 word bog me down on a song - Don't like the word build a bridge I say - A very rough draft of a song that will probably never see the light of day - I posted the meaning of the word - Won't bother me if the word stays or goes - Have not even tried to strum a few chor...
by BarnaBus RoX
February 1st, 2014, 5:33 am
Forum: News
Topic: Important News
Replies: 9
Views: 7007

Re: Important News

Thanks Guys : Vic - You bought a guitar in Everton colours.... Oh well, at least you've got no excuse not to play the blues now..... Um ok Everton colors , is that a good thing ? :) I was playing a lil tonight actually :) Rocket Dog - How does it feel to play? Are you pleased with it? Feels out of t...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 31st, 2014, 3:38 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language
Replies: 18
Views: 4131

Re: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language

Ha ha ha ha Paul :)
Sorry Trudi has already named it " Sweet Blues " , she thinks I can play the blues huh ...silly girl LOL :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
by BarnaBus RoX
January 31st, 2014, 3:35 pm
Forum: News
Topic: Important News
Replies: 9
Views: 7007

Re: Important News

The Mrs has called it " Sweet Blues " ... ha ha ha
by BarnaBus RoX
January 31st, 2014, 3:10 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language
Replies: 18
Views: 4131

Re: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language

OK then on Photo Bucket I have these options ..
Email & IM
Direct -
HTML -
IMG

Which one do all you guys an Ladies use ? ... I 'm new to this posting photos thing LOL
by BarnaBus RoX
January 31st, 2014, 2:29 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language
Replies: 18
Views: 4131

Re: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language

Hi David - I had a giggle at what you said about my singing voice - I seriously can't sing but thank you for the kind words :) I 'm not going to get bogged down over 1 word in this - When time permits I will get 1 of my guitars out an mess about with this - Paul has done more on this than I have he ...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 31st, 2014, 5:10 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language
Replies: 18
Views: 4131

Re: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language

Hey Paul , Thanks for the reply an suggesting the changes , I kind of like them :) As previously said , very rough draft , have sang it myself in my head ( because the world not ready to hear me sing just yet ha ha ha ) Having a massive Low hovering over the coast line here - So this will be put on ...