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by smokindog
October 12th, 2004, 8:03 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Week 49 - Wishes
Replies: 19
Views: 2567

Not much to ad here, I think the revision is good :D :D I like your song.
I can't comment on the spelling, I'm the worlds worst speller :lol:
smokindog
by smokindog
October 12th, 2004, 7:51 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: WEEK 49 - Small Town
Replies: 9
Views: 1573

NICE :!: the the bridge and last chorus was well done i thought, :D I loved it!---smokindog
by smokindog
October 12th, 2004, 7:39 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: WEEK 49- HEROES WISH
Replies: 9
Views: 1614

8) 8) Ok, I did a revision on this yesterday. as always any ideas are appreciated :D :D thans's the dog. :lol: Wish I could walk again Impiarment free to be standing in stride I can see this in my mind Like a speeding bullet flying the city skyline Wish I was a superman a crusader i could be I could...
by smokindog
October 12th, 2004, 7:10 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Bring back Sunday Composers Group
Replies: 27
Views: 3975

Sound click is easy to use and you can get a free creative commons copy rite for your tunes. creativecommons.org
you can use it to post mp3's or just spoken lyrics so others can check them out "it a beaut Clarke" :lol: . Did I say it was free! --check out my page -Smokindog 8) 8)
by smokindog
October 12th, 2004, 6:31 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: ssg 49 - Wishes
Replies: 6
Views: 1724

8) 8) Love it! very nice, I like a tune that don't have a happy ending :twisted: Just one more verse! BTW I checked out your sound click page, very cool! :D I keep my tunes there as well. You can get a creative commons copy rite for your songs as well. creativecommons.org ---check out my page--smoki...
by smokindog
October 11th, 2004, 2:31 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: WEEK 49- HEROES WISH
Replies: 9
Views: 1614

Hey Celt, I was driving home this morning after a 12 hour shift when i heard the news on the radio. I was tired, but felt I needed to write something about it. He was truly a man who did every thing he could to make his wish come true and was a "super hero"to many people :) as soon as i wake up a bi...
by smokindog
October 11th, 2004, 7:25 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: WEEK 49- HEROES WISH
Replies: 9
Views: 1614

WEEK 49- HEROES WISH

This a draft. :cry:

Heroes Wish

wish I had strenth
Standing in stride
Impairment free to be
Speeding along the sky line

I wish i was a superman
no one as free as I
Riding swift horses
A hero to be

I wish to escape now
To at last persevere
no longer to endure
or preside in this chair
by smokindog
October 8th, 2004, 1:59 pm
Forum: News
Topic: RIP Ernie Ball
Replies: 2
Views: 1676

I'v used his strings since 1974! 8) 8)
by smokindog
October 8th, 2004, 1:55 pm
Forum: News
Topic: Charlie Watts
Replies: 8
Views: 2971

8) 8) Those guys can still rock with the best of them. I think there live shows are better now than they were 30 years ago :!:
by smokindog
October 8th, 2004, 1:44 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Comments on Week 48
Replies: 4
Views: 874

This is a good thing(sorry Martha), I needed a good kick in the rump to get going and improve my writing skills :D :D This was my second week and i feel i have learned a lot here and will continue to do so :D :D speaking of Martha Stewart, Prison might be a good topic for us some time in the future ...
by smokindog
October 8th, 2004, 12:33 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Bring back Sunday Composers Group
Replies: 27
Views: 3975

8) 8) I like the free form -scrap book/sand box idea better :D I don't have a lot of time to record so i would rather record songs i have developed already :) :) Right now I'm doing rough demo 's on a 4-tack cassette and mixing to the pc hard drive, I like the lo-fi thing myself and just get confuse...
by smokindog
October 8th, 2004, 12:18 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: 48 War Party
Replies: 19
Views: 2966

8) 8) WOW, heavy man! I saw ferenheight the other day for the first time and if that don't make you think, nothing will! A great twist to this weeks topic! I would go over each line and see if you can use fewer words, I find this usually fixes about 75% of my problems :D For example the line "Break ...
by smokindog
October 7th, 2004, 10:21 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG Week 48 - sarah
Replies: 9
Views: 1407

Hey sarah, Real cool lyrics :D :D I really liked the last verse and the first chorus was great! 8) 8) smokindog
by smokindog
October 7th, 2004, 4:21 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Look Mom I'm flying
Replies: 22
Views: 2986

8) 8) Hey thanks Jackal and Bob. I guess I will have to go rent the Matrix next week, seeing I'm one of the few on this planet who havent seen it yet. lol :lol:
by smokindog
October 7th, 2004, 9:07 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Look Mom I'm flying
Replies: 22
Views: 2986

8) 8) Scratch, I think I will go with your sugestion "With morpheus to stay" THANKS! :D :D
This is a great group here! I already have learned a great deal in the last 2 weeks.