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by smokindog
October 6th, 2004, 8:41 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Look Mom I'm flying
Replies: 22
Views: 1762

Thanks every one for the kind support and constructive critiques. I like the morpheus line and don't know what to do, I suppose i could just say "in arms of morpheus to stay", leaving out THE. :?: :? as far as the last chorus i think i will cheat a bit here, since when I record it i will repeat the ...
by smokindog
October 5th, 2004, 9:45 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Week 48 - Hell of a Party!!!
Replies: 13
Views: 1409

Thats a great song. Takes me back to the 1970's. :oops:
by smokindog
October 5th, 2004, 9:34 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Week 48 - First time on here, here goes nothin'
Replies: 10
Views: 1312

Nice song, I can see the imagery clearly. I'm new to this myself :lol: . I find it helpfull to go over each line and see if i can say what i want in fewer words. nice tidy chorus also :)
by smokindog
October 5th, 2004, 9:16 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Look Mom I'm flying
Replies: 22
Views: 1762

Look Mom I'm flying

8) 8) This is a bit of a coutionary tail (I like to write them for some reason). something that almost happened to me in 1977. :oops: This may be on the morbid side, but I go there sometimes. :( LOOK MOM I'M FLYING I,m going to a party Never been to one befor Got a invitation I'm knocking on the doo...
by smokindog
October 5th, 2004, 4:32 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG2 Week 48 - Sozay
Replies: 10
Views: 1026

8) 8) I liked the chorus the best :D . The verses also had some good lines! "relieved to take your leave"" I liked also.
:D :D
by smokindog
October 3rd, 2004, 3:15 pm
Forum: Guitar Players Discussion
Topic: Good Electric in the Sub $600 range?
Replies: 15
Views: 2149

8) 8) Arjen makes a good point, as does luvmytele. I got a samick strat copy in 1997 thas has held up well exept for the 5-way switch. I paid $350.00 for it. i still use it a lot, sounds good for hard rock, but my fender (1989 japan made standard) does sound warmer and has a better tone fore bluesy ...
by smokindog
October 1st, 2004, 6:44 pm
Forum: Guitar Players Discussion
Topic: Good Electric in the Sub $600 range?
Replies: 15
Views: 2149

I would go with the best strat or tele you can get for the money. I don't like the epi less paul as is , but if you up grade the pick-up on them they are good also 8) 8)
by smokindog
October 1st, 2004, 6:43 pm
Forum: Guitar Players Discussion
Topic: Good Electric in the Sub $600 range?
Replies: 15
Views: 2149

I would go with the best strat or tele you can get for the money. I don't like the epi less paul as is , but if you up grade the pick-up on them they are good also 8) 8)
by smokindog
October 1st, 2004, 4:34 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Week 47 - Shelter
Replies: 7
Views: 849

8) 8) I,m with scratch her, can't go wrong with a bluesy tune. I think repeating a line is a great tool. If you have somthing imortant to say ' repeat it! LOL. Good tune, I like it alot! :D
by smokindog
October 1st, 2004, 4:10 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Music
Replies: 2
Views: 503

8) 8) I feel your pain :!: I do better when I write something on the guitar first, get a groove going, then I come up with the words and melody at the same time more or less. Some times I will come up with a phrase or just an idea watching T.V. or at work and put them together with a guitar riff i h...
by smokindog
September 29th, 2004, 6:17 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: new guy
Replies: 7
Views: 1054

8) 8) Thanks for the encouragement! My inspiration comes largly from the old blues men like Willie dixon, The three kings and of course the late, great John Lee Hooker( the greatest bluesman of them all) :D The blues is a great genre to work in because you have a limited amount of verse to apply and...
by smokindog
September 27th, 2004, 11:47 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG2 - Week 47 - Sozay
Replies: 7
Views: 903

8) 8) I really loved the line"gave birth to the day"
by smokindog
September 27th, 2004, 11:40 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG Week 46 (Belated? lol)
Replies: 3
Views: 489

8) 8) I like this a lot, to me it has a 60's vibe(thats a good thing). I think the idea is very good --ken
by smokindog
September 27th, 2004, 11:24 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: new guy
Replies: 7
Views: 1054

thanks

Thanks for the reply, i appreciate the kind remarks. My wife won't let me hang the poker dogs up ether. I have most of my songs (original material) on soundclick.com If you like, go to the site and just type in bluezers in the look up and you should get to my page. Smokindog and the bluezers is sort...
by smokindog
September 27th, 2004, 8:26 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: new guy
Replies: 7
Views: 1054

new guy

Hey, I,m new here. I,m 47 and started writing songs this year(better late than never). I mostly write blues tunes and i record them on my 4 track tascam and put them on sound click just for fun, i can't sing and play that good but the dogs seem to like it. I found the sunday songwriters club and it ...