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Simplyenchanting
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New Song

Post by Simplyenchanting » March 16th, 2012, 10:09 pm

Hey guys! New song...let me know what you think? :)

Dancing in the Rain
 
(Verse 1)
 
I recall being surprised,

how I was dazzled by your beautiful eyes,

cause they reminded me of the stars at night,

and the way things shine when it rains outside

Remember the day you walked up to me?

I can still hear your voice, so sweet.

 When I see you I momentarily catch my breath…

Baby save some perfection for the rest-of us.

Ohhoh please -

(Chorus)

Come on out to the middle of the street,

It doesn't matter that we've both got two left feet,

I wanna go dancing in the rain,

Without you it wouldn't be quite the same...

You can take my hand, darling what do you say,

Would you take me dancing in the rain?

The lights are shining off the pavement,

Here with you, this moment,

I've been waiting...

let's go dancing in the rain.

(Verse 2)

You speak and I feel my heart skip a beat,

Like lightning when it strikes it knocks me off my feet

Baby step out in the rain with me,

 Who cares if we look a little bit crazy.

Don't try to think it through,

What's a little rain storm gonna do?

When you're close to me,

 It seems like suddenly I can't breathe,

Ohhoh so -

(Chorus)

Come on out to the middle of the street,

It doesn't matter that we've both got two left feet,

I wanna go dancing in the rain,

Without you it wouldn't be quite the same...

You can take my hand, darling what do you say,

Would you take me dancing in the rain?

The lights are shining off the pavement,

Here with you, this moment,

I've been waiting...

let's go dancing in the rain

(Bridge)

Yeah my heart is pounding,

and the thunder's loud an,

I'm not fearless but I'll take my chances,

if it's you I'm holding hands with.

(Chorus)

Come on out to the middle of the street,

It doesn't matter that we've both got two left feet,

I wanna go dancing in the rain,

Without you it wouldn't be quite the same...

You can take my hand, darling what do you say,

Would you take me dancing in the rain?

The lights are shining off the pavement,

Here with you, this moment,

I've been waiting...

let's go dancing in the rain

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aurora
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Re: New Song

Post by aurora » September 12th, 2012, 5:44 pm

I know this post is kind of old, but I don't stop in often so it's new to me. I like it! I especially like the line "save some perfection for the rest of us." Wish I'd written it. :)
A guitar has moonlight in it. ~ James M. Cain

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