I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again

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chefie
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I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again

Post by chefie » July 9th, 2017, 4:09 pm

I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again

Been working on songs never finished . . . . .

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I came home feeling something that I’ve never felt before
butterflies in my stomach, my feet off the floor
had a smile so wide it stretched way beyond my face
wasn’t even sure where I was, never been in this place

and a name kept repeating itself and landed on my lips
I spoke the name and closed my eyes, and everything seemed to fit
it was as real as life itself could ever ever be
I couldn’t believe what was happening, was happening to me

and I’ll never ever ever ever fall in love for the first time, again
and it’ll never ever ever ever be as real, as it was then

and I found myself outside your door not knowing what I should do
I turned to leave then turned back around, and standing in the doorway was you
and you smiled at me and called my name in a way I’d never heard
and it seemed you felt the same way too, without speaking a word

and then we went upon our way dreaming of our life
what we would and what we wouldn’t do with you as my wife
everything seemed so perfect, everything so real
I thought that we had said it all and nothing was concealed

and I’ll never ever ever ever fall in love for the first time, again
and it’ll never ever ever ever be as real, as it was then

And then the day finally came and I could hardly wait
at first all I thought was happening was you were running late
hours went by and slowly the guests started to leave
no word no call no anything didn’t know what to believe

No one’s waiting anymore, they’ve all gone home
and I’m left here sitting by myself, never felt so all alone
I guess what I thought was meant to happen, was never meant to be
the dream I thought we both had dreamt was only dreamt by me

and I’ll never ever ever ever fall in love for the first time, again
it’ll never ever be as real, as it was then

and I never ever imagined it would turn out this way
the vows I rehearsed from my heart I’ll never get to say

and I’ll never ever ever ever fall in love for the first time, again
and it’ll never ever ever ever be as real, as it was then

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Re: I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again

Post by John Sargent » July 14th, 2017, 5:07 am

During tis section:

And then the day finally came and I could hardly wait
at first all I thought was happening was you were running late
hours went by and slowly the guests started to leave
no word no call no anything didn’t know what to believe

It seems like you need some sonic changes. Perhaps a key change or a tempo/rhythm change. Something to really differentiate it from the rest.

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Re: I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again

Post by chefie » July 14th, 2017, 9:32 pm

Thanks, John. I totally agree with you.

Neil

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