Good job on the speed...I just now got out my guitar for the first thoughts for the week.
It looks like all sensory details....a line or two twisted for rhymes sake......Good job on sticking to the squirrels topic.....one point of confusion for me...........
Do you mean MALL or MAUL?
Verb: (of an animal) Wound (a person or animal) by scratching and tearing.
Noun: A large building or series of connected buildings containing a variety of retail stores.
I understand it better if it is "Maul"......I don't understand if it is "Mall"......if it is "Mall" consider switching it to "Wall"
Thanks for sharing