Glad to see you posted (and a recording, too) despite being busy! I'll try keep doing that, too
Like James, I love this bit:
Every minute I get older.
Death is leanin' on my shoulder.
Man, oh, Man, it's killing me.
Deadly (no pun intended
) writing! Like how it moves from "death" to "killing", brilliant and funny!
Also like this:
If they listen at all,
They hear me yell.
Especially because of the paradox of people only being able to hear sb yell if they listen to that person
Didn't know the original so never would've guessed.. did have a vague resemblance to "Something Stupid" in my ears though (not even public domain, that one, I think