Year 14 Week12 Sometimes You Gotta Shout

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Celt
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Year 14 Week12 Sometimes You Gotta Shout

Post by Celt » January 18th, 2016, 8:59 am

It's been too long since I've participate in this group but there's no time like the present.

Blues in Bb
Sometimes You Gotta Shout

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Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you feel like you ain't got nothing left to lose

Wake up in the morning the sun it hurts your head
When wake up in the morning and that sun it hurts your head
Taking care of business but you're wishing you stayed in bed

Down at the yard they be working you overtime
Yes down at the freight yard they be working you overtime
Spending half your life just trying to make that dollar and a dime

Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you feel like you ain't got nothing left to lose


Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you feel like you ain't got nothing left to lose

When you want a little loving she pushes you away
When you need a little loving she keeps pushing you away
You say “Baby what's the matter” but she ain't got nothing to say

Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you gotta shout sometimes you gotta sing the Blues
Sometimes you feel like you ain't got nothing left to lose
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Re: Year 14 Week12 Sometimes You Gotta Shout

Post by LingDar » January 18th, 2016, 6:32 pm

I loved listening to it, except that recording buzz.
The only issue that I came up with is that the verse about the girl feels like an abrupt thing as the rest wasn't about her.
Also, "She has nothing to say?" really very surprising. :lol:

Thanks for the song.

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Re: Year 14 Week12 Sometimes You Gotta Shout

Post by Celt » January 19th, 2016, 12:28 pm

Thanks for the input. Yes that last verse isn't the greatest I was just trying to finish I guess.
There was suppose to be a third verse before it transitioning from workplace to
home but it just hasn't come together yet. As for the buzz I'm just getting back into
recording on a new machine so there will some bugs to work out.
Thanks Again
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