SSG2-Week 2-Metalhead

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Re: SSG2-Week 2-Metalhead

Postby Olav » November 12th, 2003, 9:12 am

The funniest story I have read in a long time.
Well done. Olav

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Re: SSG2-Week 2-Metalhead

Postby Alan Green » November 12th, 2003, 10:48 am

Marvellous.

Some of the line lengths are struggling but there's certainly some potential there.


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Re: SSG2-Week 2-Metalhead

Postby dhodge » November 13th, 2003, 7:18 am

What a great take on Beauty and the Beast!  ;)

What sort of music do you have in mind for this? Knowing that would help get a better handle on how the lines will read.

You're off to an impressive start, sir!

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Re: SSG2-Week 2-Metalhead

Postby Bob » November 13th, 2003, 7:38 am

[quote author=Metalhead link=board=ssg;num=1068580921;start=0#0 date=11/11/03 at 14:02:01]
and the redneck took to liking her really, really good
[/quote]

Excellent line - just oozes menace.

Echo Alan's comments on the line length in places.

Excellent stuff

Are you going to record and post it, cos it would be great to hear it.

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