Absolutely amazing song. I especially liked the three, four, five structure. Takes a bit getting used to but it does grab you. There is one thing that bothers me though. Words like cerulean, shrapnel are not that common in songs for a reason : The average person won't associate himself with a song if he can't understand the words immediately as he has heard them. If you are going for a Piano Man kind of mood you must remember that the toughest words in that song are "Oh, la la la, de de da
La la, de de da da da". That's what endears the song to people, its simplicity. Again I must commend the structure and the "plot" of the song. It really is brilliant.
A handful of quarters, and a naked song, don't answer the question of where we belong.