Ken: I gave it some thought and I guess it';s better to drop the fourth part. It really is way too little space to do something, without the turnaround it's almost a one-chord vamp. Feel free to schedule me in for the next one.
Can't wait to hear it! Did you send the lo-fi demo over PM or e-mail? Just wondering as I haven't seen anything yet. Though my e-mail is notorious for delivering me things hours or even days after they were actually sent.