hey scratch,it's been a long time since i have been here. a lot going on with me and getting over some past stuff, you should know what i mean.but on...

hey marv,i wasn't offended at all. you managed to write in such a vague way that someone shouldn't get offended by it. unless maybe it happened to t...

hey jamir,i think you did a great job here. did read the lyrics till i heard the mp3 and read along with you singing. i think your folk style fits t...

hey scratch,too bad i didn't get a chance to comment before the song died. but i do want to say that i liked it and liked where it was going. hopefu...

hey xposed,ok let me see if i can help any. yes songs paint pictures and yes they do put the listener in a mood. one just might be stronger than the...

hey celt,great job. very nice with great flow and sentiment. i do have to agree with vic on the fact that verse 2 does sound like it would round out...

hey scratch,i will need to read this one again and really sit and critque this fully. but as of the first read through it was difficult. which is not...

hey marv,don't know what to say that hasn't already been said. certainly one of your best and most powerful songs yet. the bridge really drives the ...

thank you so much scratch. i feel so stupid now.i never thought of that one being filtered.-CheapThrill

hey vic, nice song. wow wanting to go to texas, hhhmmmmm........a hot, flat, humid, boring place. sounds great. the winters may not be that bad, an...

hey scratch,very proud of you for posting song. even though you don't think you sing or play well. i think you big a fabulous job. if only you coul...

hey scratch,nice job here. i really do like the lines that you decided to write about. you always manage to tell a good story that is easily underst...

hey b0sendorfer,you might want to take a look at the sunday songwritters group forum. that might help you out. each week you get a new topic of what...

hey vic,thanks for the encouragment. i am going to try and get something else written towards this soon. i am happy to hear that you like it so far....

hey scratch,But build them up, so your chorus reinforces the notion that none of the other nursery rhymes / cliches that we've come to know and love c...