Well, Vic, this is quite appropriate timing :lol: We are heading out of town for at least 4 or 5 days because of smoke problems in our area. The scho...
Great stuff Neil. Your upbeat and catchy music and singing suited the subject well and made the gentle humour really effective. I hope you'll be si...
Thanks very much Paul. I thoroughly enjoyed your video. :D I'm busy with other projects right now, but I'll add one of those to the list. Twenty-fi...
Chris, all the backing is done by playing the acoustic guitar, bass and Cajon. Thanks for the info. I'm impressed. I had to Google "Cajon" though,...
A well told story and I also liked the build from the individual to the company to the country. However, I noticed that the title "five dollar coffee...
I really enjoyed the playing and singing, Paul. Great job. :D How do you do the backing? Is it just you playing, or is it augmented in some way? Ve...
Nice sound on the instruments and vocals. :D .....so on the listen the song has a whimsical, laid back "don't take life (or death) too seriously" att...
How true and what a great idea for a song. :) +1 :) Another good song Neil. I had no idea that the US still issued pennies. Australia stopped us...
Hi MrEThe re-writes look good. Tighter, punchier and more effective. I like the verses individually too. But, as James mentions, you still seem not ...
Hi Paul,I liked your idea of a commentary on the commercialisation of the news. Good strong first verse too. I remember those early newsreaders as be...
This is my 3rd attempt in a row [My Barong, The Special and this] with Pat Pattison's method of songwriting [Lyrics first]. He says you should try i...
Thank you both very much for listening. It's not always easy to listen to someone like me grinding through their own compositions, because we've all b...
Hi James,Another fine fast composition from you. I liked the way you built the theme up to the clever punchline - which I hadn't guessed or anticipat...
Very topical. I liked how you included the IMF. Some of the rhymes seem a bit rough but overall, I like it. Thanks MrE. :) Yes, you're spot on with ...