wow, so much griping over commercially successful music... we're either pretty lame or way too cool for pop (i'll pretend to be the later)

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I haven't listened to much Radiohead. You should give "Kid A" a listen. I think I have it somewhere if you want to borrow it (you could probably fin...

I'm thinking you're talking about Inception? Just a thought, but not sure about the "self-tapping screw". Maybe Matrix?Interesting how the meaning o...

Yeah, good clear story, but could be applied to any number of long wars or conflicts. As far as the comments about "shooting", the verb could refer t...

BTW if you are using the Windows Sound Recorder, once it stops at 60 seconds, hit record again and it doubles the time....so you could keep doubling i...

Ok, got a better recording. Being home sick helps get leisure activities done :roll:

The Neil Young reference throwsme a little because the song is called Mississippi andthe Neil reference bring to mind Ohio or Alabama. Actually you'r...

ha, I guess there is an automatic edit on here, I didn't write it as "darn"

Agreed, but that is usually in the same verse. ah, touche. I just thought I'd see if I could get away with critiquing the critiquer. I guess not.Th...

James, the blues is supposed to say the same thing. For example:Muddy Waters:You say you love me darlin',please, call me on the phone sometimeYou say...

Well, I made a few minor changes - mostly I'm trying to bring it back to this: the girl was REAL but is gone. There is no mental delusion, just tryin...

P.S ***POOF line "She portrays a compelling heart"changed to"Most likely she'd have my heart on a silver platter" :mrgreen:Feedback? Much better than...

Thanks James, first of all, I didn't realize that a ghost was implied. Maybe that came from the word "phantasm", but while that is often implied by i...