btw I think its totally fine to have your instrument right there while your composing trying different things, thats what I do. I just meant to be su...

A few points to add that I think are important.1. Unless you are a very strong composer, you should generally try to write your melody first and then...

haha thats why everyone who speaks english needs to embrace the southern tradition of the word yall, every other language on earth has a plural form o...

You'll is the contraction for you will. Still only referring to the girl.

Hey its kind of hard to judge lyrics without hearing the music but heres what I think. Better you cut me with some truth than keep me honest with you...

Hey that sounds great, its catchy and I really believe it. Your guitar sounds like it might be slightly out of tune, but your voice that definitely w...

I like your imagery, the lyrics are very singable also. How about a mp3 or some chords so we can hear it? I had an old song with the line "the sun w...

Well I am surprised no one else has commented. Metal isn't really my thing, but my main problem with it is the screaming vocals so i've got no proble...

That is so weird I have had that same rhythm floating around in my head for the past month. It fools you into thinking its in 7/8 because of the stre...

Hey buddy its been a long time. Wow I remember the first song you posted with vocals a year or so ago, you've gotten very good at singing. I really ...

All I have to say is "oh ya" you don't see enough stuff like this on here. :D Starry eyes sounds really great, everything melts together into an awe...

Hey, I like this a lot. I see what cnev is saying about the riff after get down. Its not that it doesn't work, but it is not what I would have playe...