I think in parts a very good song, but.....Pete Seeger always said that the flaw for the majority of aspiring songwriters is that their songs are over...
this song is a better song than the other one you posted, its repetition are its strong pionts although it suffer from the same rythme problems as the...
Most of the verses appear to fall apart at the end due to a lack of rythmefor example: I may have misunderstood your intention but for the bitand alth...
Omega's comments all seem about right. the song flows well but the chorus is cluttered and falls over itself. if you take omega's advice and fix the c...
This is the first time i have seriously ventured into this forum here at guitar niose and after a quick glance I would have to say that Vic writes the...
Ya! what a great peace of writing, good imagery throughout.
hum, looks like I forget to mention John Fogerty, Vic Lewis wont be happy
overall I think u have written a good song which is let down by a flat ending after the bridge. dont underestimate the importance of a good conclusion
The songs structure is very good I think, but the refrain “Got to get out of this hole,†Is weak and the song ends flatly with “you're the best ...
Good Insight! Thanks! Agreed!
Well it looks like Bob Dylan while have to get my vote here, although i don't think I would possibly like anyone else as much. John Fogerty does well...
I wanna be bob dylan, and Bob Dylan played the guitar so hear i am. Next i suppose i'll have to learn piano, bass, harmonica etc. to keep up.
Johnny Cash should have covered John Fogerty's Bad Moon Rising
Sorry, that "inp" is supposed to say "Implored"
I think I am inp to go with the man to the left. People say he cant sing, people say he cant play the guitar. But I dont think it matter because no on...