Actually this already sounds like part of a song. I'd go with that.Symetrical LiesSurrogate DreamsIt Sounded RightEasily Gleaned
Actually your English sounds better than most Americans'.
I think sometimes song lyrics are better when they're just simple and to the point. Believe it or not, not everyone knows what the word encompassing m...
For a title I was thinking "She Thinks Why" How about "Why Should She Bother?"This had a lot of potential, but you're right, it came off more like a...
The willow winds itself until it touches The creek where it's shallow Where you stand with your crutches The image these lines inspire seems to warra...
Finally got to hear your music. Like Elle, I'm always wanting to speed things up, too--a personality thing perhaps, but you did a great job with the t...
Thanks Elle. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I have music, yes. I may try to record it next weekend if I can get caught up on my...
That should be easy. I think we're all trapped in one way or another. Mostly in our own minds. Good luck, everyone.
That's a nice sound, Paul. I really like that. Vocals sound really good, too. And I like the change in the chorus. Well done.Joe
Okay, thanks, Guys.Vic, no, of course I don't want you to lie. This song was written in 2005 for the title Adam West Will Always Be Batman. I thought ...
Cos baby I come as a package And you don't get nothing for free So try and then buy, well that's fine by me But you know you'll get more than you see ...
That's intense SP. Very strong lyrics. Nothing forced. Everything flows well. Good words but nothing pretentious. Well-done.Joe
Thanks SP. Yes, it is a metaphor. I guess it doesn't seem melodramatic to me because when I sing it it's light and upbeat. I also tend to use humor in...