I'm lost for words... Guess you've got to do with a very well done :D

thanx for your reply, I'm gonna change that line, the swift as a bird fits indeed!As for the recording, for me it's just too much repetition, but I wa...

I've uploaded an MP3 of it to my soundclick.But as to warn you on forehand: the regs may have noticed I've been away for a while - in that time I bare...

Great work, well done!At first I didn't like the title, made me think of Chopin's Butterfly Etude. Not that that's not good, but I thought of it as be...

Intriguing work! Both versions could do, I like the first one best (don't ask why though, just a feeling...) Good luck putting it to music, looking fo...

Thanx for your comments guys :)I think I'll keep the idea but try to rewrite it, in an easier way. I figured I'd try to use some more complex English ...

I love your writing style, the scenery. After reading a few lines I got curious on where he would end. And I guess that's a good thing! It's easy for ...

Great lyrics, both of them. Going straight to my heart and the only lyrics that do that are the good ones :)

Hmmm how'd you add yourself Arjen? I can't figure out how it works =P

I've rerecorded the song. Just curious to know what you guys think :)

heya welcome to the forumI'm Dutch too but I'll keep it in English so the others here can join in ^^ We Dutch are good at English anyway huhFirst of a...

Thanx for the feedback.I think I'm gonna use both of those suggested titles, naming it after my grandma would add something to the lyrics imo.You're r...