Thanks. I was thinking it may need to be broken up. A bridge is probably in order as I think I will do more with this song.I'm working on making song ...
Pretty. I like the lyrics. The only criticism is that the music sounds very familiar. I don't feel like I am listening to something new. I like be the...
Overall I liked it. I think the two interludes for instrumentation need to be different from the rest give it a time to really break up the song as ot...
Thanks for reviewing. I see the last line doesn't work do great in this version. I worked better in the first version, but I messed up and had too man...
I like, it is very beautiful and moving. My first thought is someone with a terminal illness. The only part I don't like is the last two lines "no mat...
I loved listening to it, except that recording buzz. The only issue that I came up with is that the verse about the girl feels like an abrupt thing as...
I like the overall thyme and flow. There are a few snags. Mostly you being too passive voice and not active enough. For exampleYou have "but I can't '...
Thanks for the feedback. I haven't really intended to work that much more on this as it is practice but I may pick it up later. Also I sing in the bar...
As the others have said the specific words are better. What sort of music does this go to?I like the "All things living the whole world round" but I d...