Not sure about a tune either but I LOVED the writing! good work keep it up!

Thanks for all your oppionons maybe I'll put my final draft on here real soon.

I like the first partthe second part i don't know depends on how you sing it but this is just what I think would improve it just a littleI want you ou...

Love it. Beautifull, thats what I think to.

Well first of all when I read it I was having troubles making it flow for some reason. but the way you sung it worked out perfect. nicley done. I love...

It's good I liked it. One part I would change if it were me but just my preferance is this:When the rest of the world spins, Why do I cry? Is my heart...

wow I really liked it. I sure hope i'm thinking of the right meaning but in terms of writing it was good. Join me in the lack of musical ability but s...

Hey I really like it but I agree with nocturne but what about:If I was wrong, I'd apologize for thatIn my head flows better that way but i don't know ...

Who was the fiddler on the roof? lol

I'm lovin it. It's awesome really enjoyed reading it keep it up. make it into a song it'll be great.

thanks I had a couple different ideas about the melody. I'll have to pick one but thanks I'll work on that ending some more to see what I can do...

Cool cool! I like it the language could be changed but overall nice emo feel to it.This part:I told you you were wrong. I said it couldn't be. I ran a...