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MJBird
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Joined: Oct 4, 2003
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Re: I can't write!

There are some great songs with only three cords repeating over and over. Rhythm also plays a big part in keeping the song interesting.

17 years ago
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RE: Eshu, Eshu we all fall down

This topic reminds me of the battle between classical andcontemporary visual artists. It is obvious to any honestperson, that the former is worthy of...

19 years ago
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RE: 2 note chords?

How about a compromise.Call them "power intervals".

19 years ago
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RE: my song: Fanatic

I liked the second version better.I would change "Glorify the Son" to "Glorify the One". Sounds better to me, and is a bit more powerful.

20 years ago
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RE: Year 2 SSG 32 The matrix of my mind - Ja'mir

I enjoyed it but also felt it needs some work.Not sure what to suggest since I am not surewhat exactly you are trying to convey.Here is how I see the ...

20 years ago
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RE: Year 2 SSG 32 The matrix of my mind - Ja'mir

I enjoyed it but also felt it needs some work.Not sure what to suggest since I am not surewhat exactly you are trying to convey.Here is how I see the ...

20 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 32- "Patterns In Static"

Really well done. I was going to suggest making it alittle longer, but now I have changed my mind. I like it as is.

20 years ago
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RE: Lost [My VERY first POST!]

Agree with the others.P.S.I would immediately take the line:"Happy just to swim in the river that I cried"and write a song with that as the chorus.

20 years ago
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RE: SSG2- Week 31- Olav

I am a big fan of the short phrase format. You didan awesome job here and it was a pleasure to read.Any changes would need to be pointed out by you.

20 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 31- "Amphibian" w/mp3

That was entertaining! Nice work. Very good rhythm and the subject is carried nicely through till the end.

20 years ago
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RE: Week 30-The rise (Revised)

Just in case you were not aware, you can change or revise by clicking the edit key on the upper right of your message.P.S. I thought your first one wa...

20 years ago
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RE: SSG week31---Tokai 12 String-Slight Edit

Sensational job with another hard assignment. I wouldn't change a thing.

20 years ago
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RE: SSG2 - week 30

Excellent solution to this vexing assignment. In fact I like yours so much...I might just skip doing mine this week. :)

20 years ago
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