Hi John!You should have been the rest of my life I love that line!Are you going to post an MP3? Gwynne.

Good job Vic!Reads good! I like it alot.Did you really learn F#m that soon? :) Happy writing, Gwynne.

Hi Neil!The "kissy fit" line stuck out to me too but that's because I really liked it! I thought it was very witty.if I did things by the numbers ther...

Hi everybody! I will be back to comment more on songs, but my power is going out for the whole day! So I have to get my but in gear, Gwynne.

Hi!Great song! Really catchy, reminded me of a John Denver tune a bit. Great falsetto in the bridge. Short, sweet to the point, sorry my power is g...

Hi John!I really like your song. I've listened to it a few times and I like the length.I have to say I noticed your voice first thing, it seems to h...

Hi!When I write a song I want to make sure it is exactly what I want to say, that's probably why it takes me so long to write just one. :) I think...

Make sure to make me a friend, Gwynne. :D

Hi everybody,I'm originally a singer and had somebody play the guitar for me. Last summer I wanted to perform at a local event and had nobody to pla...

Andrew,I tried to take a listen and it locked up my cpu. Maybe a quicktime thing. If you have somewhere to listen, maybe soundclick or myspace, post...

Hi everybody!How 'bout Don't Stop by Fleetwood Mac. I love that song!Capo 2D C GD C GD C GASame for the verse and chorus. This must have been easy, ...

mhlandry,In your critique with Hilch you wrote I like the metaphors. It's very hard to write a song like this--to me at least. I can never seem to com...

hilchNow this is a bit from left field as far as a place one visits goes as it is in my mind ... I get it...think it fits the assignment really well.I...

Thanks for all of the replies.pbee wrote I have to say I admire your ability to sing that song with all that was going on around you That's my life I ...