Love it, Celt. As I do most of your work. I really can't see anything I would change. I love the chorus. It very poetically sums up what I've trie...
This reads well to me, although I thought it was a bit odd that you repeated verses. Not that it's wrong, just that I used to use a very formulaic a...
Can't speak to the technical musical aspects of the song, -- it's been a LONG time since I studied theory. And if you ever found my piano teacher, (a...
Hey Vic,I really like the song, -- and I'm partial to the "this side of life" suggestion.Also, I''m having a very similar year. I've had two doctors ...
I've been away from playing for as long as I've been away from writing. So it's going to be quite a while before I'm ready to record anything.
James,I just typed out a very lengthy response to your feedback, attempting to address each item. My squirrely laptop ditched it. (I hate this lapto...
John, Andy,Thanks for the input. I'll keep it in mind as I think I am going to attempt a couple / few re-writes of this and see if I can get it where...
All good thoughts, James. Thanks for the feedback.I was actually trying to capture the feeling of an actual diner in my town, called the Double-T. I...
Hey John,I'm not sure I'm real comfy with the amount of repetition of "Reservoir Road". Although that could easily change (and I suspect it probably ...
Hey John,Look forward to reading your material again. I always enjoyed the stuff you put together.
Also meant to mention, -- I love the Outro. I've experienced that personally, and I'm sure many of your listeners will have also. So it definitely r...
I REALLY like the feeling of this. I concur with MrEWorm's comments. Sometimes we throw in words just to get the rhythm right in our head, but over ...
Whoa... we get points now? I'm gonna have to work harder at this. So, if I write a song about 3rd stool from the right at the Double T on Rt. 40 in ...
Good to hear someone has gone beyond "forum user" status. Hope he is making a good living from his art. I don't know if he's making a living at it....