Very nice, Alan.My favourite part is the comeuppance in the end. (I too did this verse of John's and as much as I wanted to, I couldn't come up with ...
Great work Straycat. It's amazing to see where the lines/verses have gone as they've passed from person to person.First of all, the "igloo" line. Wh...
Hey straycat,These are all great, and are very you.I'm really stricken by "It's a defeatist's gesture". So many possibilities, yet it immediately gro...
Hey Vic,This definitely captures the era you were trying for. Nice work.Only one line jumped out at me as slightly off, but I've heard the phrase bef...
Thanks all for the feedback.Ken:Thanks. I'm pleased you're pleased.Vic: Yeah, I wasn't super happy with the IQ line either. I'll have to spend some ...
I like all of these:1) A love song, or a good-bye song?2) I hope someone does something with this line, 'cause I wanna find out what Parker and friend...
Hey Vic,Very nice. I haven't had a chance to listen yet (maybe not until Saturday), but I can't wait.I love the part about the men regaining their ma...
Hey Paul,Thanks for the feedback. Too subtle was one of my concerns, that and too ambitious since this was my first serious crack at songwriting sinc...
Very nice, John.I'm not familiar with the song from which you draw the characters, but I like this song. Wonderful imagery. It leaves me with a haun...
Hey Maddog,Yeah, I remember watching that too. Horrifying.You've done a good job of showing your respect for the crew and disappointment with the pro...