I've not posted in awhile. I read the prompts every week but usually draw a blank or start something but just don't get enough to post.Should probably...

Hi Chris,I like the sea shanty with the accountant twist thing you have going on. You've done really well alsoat keeping your rhymes in order. I do no...

Thanks for the suggestions I can see how it is confusing. I started out thinking a Dan Zanes quasi-kid party song...the bourbon line is not nailed in ...

Nice job. I like your writing.I like this verse the way it is but it seems like the last two lines could be stronger. I immediately visualizeda ship w...

Horror Punk! I love it! I think it's great.Ernie

But I know,if we act from our heartsand not from our hurts,the rough-weather times will pass by. I am wondering about this because in love it is our...

I am thinking a movie with Samuel L Jackson as Detective Jerome Drizzle.

Hi James,Really like this one. You've got some cool chord harmony going on, majors where you'd expect minor,that sort of thing and the melody is inter...

Interesting lyrics. I've been contemplating the difference between literal story songs and songs that might bedescribed a poetic but are less obvious ...

Good writing. Not sure why it's called Cha Cha.I like the way the verse ending flows:10 minutes on the snooze alarmNever did a bit of harmI can relate...

I guess I should have realized that the switcheroo was intentional from a seasoned SSG veteran. Well it worked :wink:

Hi James,Like the recording. I like the continuously strummed guitar and the chord choices. Really gives it momentum.I'm thinking conversational so th...

Well James you've certainly brought out the devil on this one. :twisted: :lol: I agree pretty much with the other comments. The bible reference woul...

Hi James,I am also impressed that you put this out so fast. I like how summer is glad to show up but insulted when askedto leave.Ernie