Pbee,Im pretty sure the box represents how much he loves her. He needs a great big box to be able to fit his love for her in it.I have to agree that t...
Hi Karla,I agree with the last comment that the song flows nicely and also better than i thought it would when I read it. After I read it, I thought t...
John and Dave,Thanks so much for the feedback and Dave, please dont ever apologize for correcting my Chord names. That's part of the reason I'm here. ...
I guess its a little late to add anything but I just wanted to at least let you know that I think it all flows really well. Even better once you hear ...
Thanks Geoo.I picked that one up from my Dad also. hahaI put a link in my original post for the mp3 now. Let me know what you think.TheJackal.
Thanks Joe.This was interesting. I think I have a few good lines too but each line was written purely to try and make the first word fit. Thanks for t...
Hey Poetic,This has a real sweet feel to it. I agree with the comment about the cupcake residue though. I was thinking maybe you could use powdered su...
Put together very well.I felt like maybe the tempo could have been just a little bit quicker. Not even sure why. Just felt like there was a little too...
John,I have a 10 a 6 and a 5 year old. As stated before, I too would not know what to do if this were to happen to one of mine. Stay strong mate and k...
No-one's interested in commenting???Good, bad or indifferent are all welcome.
I have to agree Jonsi. Very mellow. Seemed like sometimes the flow of the music was a little bit off with the singing but it always came back together...