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 PJS
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Death, Decay, Delirium

Spaced out. I'm okay,
haven't found my self today.
Sleepin in the corner
can you hear the sweet delay...
I'm okay, i'm okay
Can't you see it's a sunny day.

Space bound. I'm allright,
I should leave, I think I might.
Find yourself in the cornet
atleast you think you're safe
Hey girl, what's your name
Hey girl do you feel the same?

Spaced out. I'm okay,
haven't found my self today.
Sleepin in the corner
can you hear the sweet delay...
I'm okay, i'm okay
Hey girl do you feel the same?

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Withered

She walks alone again.
She wants to save the day,
for you.
She wants to be for you.
She wants to feel the pain for you.
Can't find the will to move.
Can't find the words to choose for you.
You smile so easily,
like the world's not the same for you.

And I never knew how she made me feel.
She touched my brains and I know she made me feel...
I want to feel with her.
I want to feel withered.

I know it's hard to stay,
but don't go away. Please stay, today.
I smile so easily,
like the world's not the place for me.

And I never knew how she made me feel.
She touched my brains and I know she made me feel...
I want to feel with her.
I want to feel withered.

Can't find the will to move.
Can't find the words to choose for you.
You smile so easily,
like the world's not the same for you.

And I never knew how she made me feel.
She touched my brains and I know she made me feel...
I want to feel with her.
I want to feel withered.

If you want to, you can also check out the songs at
http://www.mikseri.net/artistit/?id=37655
I havent had the time to record the vocal tracks yet, but check it out anyway...I think it's somekind of alternative rock. There's allso the music for the song "ignorant" that I posted here a few weeks ago.


   
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(@pierson)
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yeah ur songs were pretty good. I really enjoyed "Death, Decay, Delerium." it was pretty deep and pretty inspirational. I can look at it and some lines spring ideas into my head. Thanks. But, yeah, do me a favor and check out my songs. Anything by "pierson".

Andy

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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(@noel-iu)
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Hi!
great song you got here PJS
I especially like "Death, Decay, Delerium."
Have you made some music for it?
If so... try some coldplay/embrace style... it would fit well
Take care

http://www.freewebs.com/noel-iu

http://noel-iu.dmusic.com/


   
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 PJS
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Yep. The music is basicly ready, I just need to record the vocal tracks on Withered, I changed the lyrics quite a bit on that on. I didn't like the version of "withered" I posted here so I made "some" adjustments and now it's totally different.


   
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 PJS
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Check out the songs @ http://koti.mbnet.fi/pyrysuo/The%20Alchemist/

If you like the music, you can also print the covers and burn the songs on a cd...


   
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(@e-sherman)
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I like the music, but the singing seems off pitch, especially when you harmonize.

The king of rock, some say lives
the lizard king, is surely dead
the king of France, lost his head
the King of Kings... bled
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(@dillydally)
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ok well yea the harmonizing for DDD isn't that great, and you need i dunno a different tone? * no offense though * not trying to tell you how to sing

and i love the song Ignorant thats on mp3, its very well played out

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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(@mezlay)
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those were some really good song lyrics the one thing I didn't really get was the touching brains part She touched my brains and I know she made me feel...

all and all I thought they were really good.


   
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