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Arjen v Assen
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A few miles more

Just a few steps more
A few steps more and I will reach the door
But when I see
I have to go
More than just a mile
I finally see I'll be walking for a while

Just a few miles to go
How far I'm away I don't know
I just feel I'm getting tired
So I start walking slow

A few miles more
I see a lot of cities
But not the one I'm looking for
So I'll have to walk a few miles more

A few miles more
A few miles to explore
Even though I don't want it anymore
A few miles more
A few miles more
It would be easier when I loved
The girl next door
But that didn't happen
So I'll have to walk
A few miles more

Just a few miles to go
How far I'm away I don't know
I just feel I'm getting tired
So I start walking slow

A few miles more
A few miles to explore
Even though I don't want it anymore
A few miles more
A few miles more
It would be easier when I loved
The girl next door
But that didn't happen
So I'll have to walk
A few miles more

Please give some comment :D
Keep jamming:)
Arjen


   
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Alan Green
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Posts: 5342
 

No pun intended, but where's it going? It's great down to the first rendition of

It would be easier when I loved
The girl next door
But that didn't happen
So I'll have to walk
A few miles more

but from then to the end it doesn't give us any new material and so it loses what you've built up.

Best,

A :-)

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