ANGEL
I never believed in Angels
Until my eyes saw you
I never believed in miracles
Until I found you
Nothing ever fancy happened in my life
Until you stepped into sight
Baby your beauty is
As a clear blue sky
Your an angel
And im telling you tonight
-Chorus-
Youre an Angel
Its What You Are
You swoop on down
And take me to the stars
Your my Angel
I promise to you
There never could be
Someone as beautiful as you
-Chorus-
I am not totally done with this song, but I think it is a pretty good one!
I think it's a good start.needs more verses.
Maybe don't call her an angel until the chorus.
For example say something like this in line one
I never believed in Heaven
Until my eyes saw you...
I think its better not to spoil what you think she is until the chorus.
Just a thought.
Keep writing!
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
I think your off to a good start too.Heres an idea to make the 2nd verse flow better
Nothing magical has ever happened in my life
Until you stepped into sight
Baby your beauty is as
Clear as the bright blue sky
Just an idea. Keep writing Nite.............
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