Me and a buddy just started writing original music/lyrics. He writes most the lyrics I just add input. I have a couple laying around, i know they need work (thats why i am posting) also worried that they are written like a poem and would be hard to do something musically. I know there is a lot of experience and opinions out there so any advice (good/bad) would be great. Thanks, Eddy
Another lonely night
Another empty bottle
Another cry myself to sleep
Another drown in all my sorrow
Another endless day
Another lie to tell
Another game to play
Another face to sell
Another "turn my life around"
Another hopeless dream
Another wish I was someone else
Another death of a dream (i know, pretty weak line)
Another "It's ok don't worry"
Another 'You'll be there soon"
Another burden I try to carry
Another scar Another wound
Another lonely night
Another empty bottle
Another cry myself to sleep
Another drown in all my sorrow
