I was just wondering if anyone was interested in writing music for a song I wrote? You can make it go anyway you wont. I play bass and I would really love to see my lyrics turn into reality.
My sins hung on me
Like an apple in a tree
Never gonna ask for love
Cuz Ill never be free
I gave up a long time ago
Not wanting to get hurt
Never asked for the pain
But baby I got burnt
-Chorus-
Here I lay and sometimes sit
With my thoughts a pondering
Why did you treat me bad
When I never made you crazy nor mad
Never ever gave up on faith
Until the moment I met you
Always believed in angels
Until my eyes...They layed on you
-Chorus-
My body goes numb
With a blow to my heart
Nothing could feel worse
Nothing could bring more harm
-Chorus-
Ive always shared this story
To a million people its true
No one could change the way
The way ill always have feelings for you
Oh my dreams are floating
Like a cloud in the sky
You never leave my mind
Even when I close my eyes
Ive always shared this story
To a million people its true
No one could change the way
The way ill always have feelings for you
-Chorus-
Hiya,
What do you have in mind? Accoustic guitar? Piano? Death-metal friendly? Have you got any kind of progression worked out already? If you can give us some kind of heads up, I'm sure any number of our participants could some up with something workable.
You might want to run though some of your lines, just to make sure they all work within the musical constructs,
Best,
A :-)
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I want this song to be acoustic.
Also I think that the guitar should come in soft in the beginning and then when the chorus comes in it should get more up beat.
This Part...
My body goes numb
With a blow to my heart
Nothing could feel worse
Nothing could bring more harm
I think should also be more upbeat because it leads into a chorus.
thats good that you sort of have an idea for how the music should be already. And i agree that it would probably sounds good acoustic. It might even be good as a rock song or something. I dont know why but reading it reminded me of a classic rock song
Very nice lyrics by the way! haha
" Ah man, that went down like a lead balloon."
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Thanks man...yeah it could be a soft rock song. Thanks for the compliment also.
Fletch,Very nice music. I wish I could help but in between writing I'm still learning guitar. But you came to the right place for help. I'm new here and the people here have helped me tremendesly. No matter what genre song I post. Wish you luck Nite.................
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