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Crazy - My new song!


(@chuk50)
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I'm just making this song up as I go along. It's called Crazy. Hope its OK. Here goes...
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V1
I was walking through the town when I thought I saw you
I looked up to the sky so blue
Looked back down, then you were gone
I swear I saw you your hair how it shone

*Chorus*
I think I must be going crazy
I went to a shrink and he said maybe
Now I gotta go for one more day
It's torture without you, what can I say?

V2
I didn't ask for it to be this way
Never thought I'd make it through the day
I feel so lonely
Please please, why can't you phone me?

*Chorus*
I think I must be going crazy
I went to a shrink and he said maybe
Now I gotta go for one more day
It's toture without you, what can I say?

*Solo*

*Chorus*
I think I must be going crazy
I went to a shrink and he said maybe
Now I gotta go for one more day
It's toture without you, what can I say? (X2)
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I think that worked rather well

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 Anonymous
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Hey chuk40, a nice little song here, well done!

My only comment is that the end of the chorus and the start of verse 2:

..
Now I gotta go for one more day
It's torture without you, what can I say?

V2
I didn't ask for it to be this way
Never thought I'd make it through the day

Seem a little too "run together" what with the rhyming lines.

Good job overall though! :)

Pete


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(@chuk50)
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So you're saying maybe change the start of V2? I'll do my best... Lol!

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