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(@orange-armada)
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Dirty little Secret
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I just wanna suck you in
I just wanna make your day
Just pretend no one is there
run your fingers through my hair

You can be my dirty little secret
We dont have to tell anyone
You dont need to love him

yeah
im addicted to you baby
but you know I love it
creeping through my brain and
into my heart
suck out all the poison
from my life until your all that I
Think about yeah
im here for you baby
Cause you know I love it
when I touch your hips
and you scream out cause
you know you want more of it
could you lay with me baby
could you stay with me baby
You could...

Wrap your arms around my neck
place your lips upon my chest
you could just turn around and leave
but I got what you need

I told you your so beautiful
when you look up at me
ready to go, take my hand

addicted to you baby
but you know I love it
creeping through my brain and
into my heart
suck out all the poison
from my life until your all that I
Think about yeah
im here for you baby
Cause you know I love it
when I touch your hips
and you scream out cause
you know you want more of it
could you lay with me baby
could you stay with me baby
You could...
You could...

nobody needs to know
your the secret I never told
Nobody needs to know
the secret I never told
How does it feel now
heartbreaker

a song I wrote the other day. Let me know if you can understand the meaning behind it. Also as always comments or critisisms are encouraged. I will most likley have an mp3 recording of this song up in the next day or so, I will let you guy sknow when I do.

my songs are registered with the canadian copyright board


   
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(@aroundtheclaxon)
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seems way to much like that other pop punk song try to be more orginal tell me what u think of my song a few down tho

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(@nolongerme)
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This does sound alot like "Dirty little secret" by The All American Rejects


   
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(@beans7178)
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as said above a title change is neccesary, you dont want people thinking of another song while listening or reading yours.

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(@orange-armada)
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thats funny, i havnt hear it lol. Ill have to download it

my songs are registered with the canadian copyright board


   
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(@orange-armada)
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any ideas for a new title?

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(@nolongerme)
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Maybe 'Addicted'?


   
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(@rag_doll_92)
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yea I hate 'dirty little secret' by the all american rejects

I think they're just rejects :)

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(@nolongerme)
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Yeah, they know they're rejects t00!


   
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(@rag_doll_92)
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well doh

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