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Finally recorded a few originals with lyrics

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(@switch10)
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http://www.soundclick.com/daveontherun

Allison and Iowa are the new ones. I wrote them a while back, i'd really like to improve the lyrics to both if anyone has any suggestions. actually suggestions on anything would be appreciated. these songs are by no means finished, recording and song structure-wise, its just to give an idea. tell me what you think...

Dave

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 lars
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Very good songs :)
(but then I'm a Dylan-fanatic (too) )

Suggestions? I don't really know - I was kinda waiting for a punch line in the Iowa song, instead of you just driving away

Good work - keep'em coming :-)

lars

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LARS kolberg http://www.facebook.com/sangerersomfolk


   
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