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14/06/2008 9:47 pm
http://www.soundclick.com/daveontherun
Allison and Iowa are the new ones. I wrote them a while back, i'd really like to improve the lyrics to both if anyone has any suggestions. actually suggestions on anything would be appreciated. these songs are by no means finished, recording and song structure-wise, its just to give an idea. tell me what you think...
Dave
Dave
15/06/2008 6:25 am
Very good songs :)
(but then I'm a Dylan-fanatic (too) )
Suggestions? I don't really know - I was kinda waiting for a punch line in the Iowa song, instead of you just driving away
Good work - keep'em coming :-)
lars
...only thing I know how to do is to keep on keepin' on...
LARS kolberg http://www.facebook.com/sangerersomfolk