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(@nocturne181)
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"Forgotten" will definitely not stay the title for this song, but its the only one I have so far. These are the lyrics from one of my really early pieces, I thought I'd see what you guys think Anyways, here it is, thanx.

I am not forgotten,
but I feel alone.
In this world of restless souls
of the unknown.
Hapless ways to find a change
that I may be
reunited with the ones
I'm meant to be.

Make me believe what you will,
I know that I want to now.
Believe what you will,
I know that I want to now.
Make me one with you.
Make me one with you.

So many times I've listened,
but I did not hear.
So many times you have tried
to lead me here.
Condescending, reprimanding,
I was wrong.
Now I have this hope to
lead me along.

Make me believe,
I know that i want to now.
Make me believe,
I know that I need you now.
Make me one with you,
Make me one with you.

"Do you serve a purpose, or purposely serve?" Corey Taylor


   
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(@cabreraluvr7)
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I like it. Especially the part about the restless souls. reminds me of a line I put in one of my songs. "and soulless bodies have come out to rein." Anyways this is about your song. I think its good!! :mrgreen:


   
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