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(@musicmaniac221)
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OK, so I thought of this idea from the band Adema. The idea of an abusive boyfriend on a girl and I just took that idea and rolled with it. I know it needs work so please comment.

Get Up, Get Out

These scars will not heal
The bruises start to show
He says he loves you
Hes just a fucking fake

[Chorus]
Why do you take this?
Why are you doing this?

You walk in the door
The pain never ends
He says he loves you
Hes just a fucking fake

[Chorus]
Why do you take this
Why are you doing this?

Look through his lies
Stop living this life
He says he loves you
He's just a fucking fake

[Bridge](x2, on 2nd time - use secondary verses too)
Get up! (Why do you take this?)
Get Out! (Why are you doing this?)
Leave this lie behind!
Get up! (Why do you take this?)
Get out! (Why are you doing this?)
Leave this life behind!

Get up!
Get out! (x4)

Why do you take this?!

Get UP!
Get OUT!

Comments very much appreciated, I know it's not perfect. Just tell me what you think. Later.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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ne1?...anyone? come one? someone...

btw...the edited part is "f u c k i n g fake"

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@bonzai_man)
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Good Job. I usually dont like it when artists swear in their songs, but I think it fits perfectly here. It really shows how passionate you are abou the song and it's message.


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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Thanks man! :) This one came pretty quick to me. I've had the idea in my head for awhile now but I just couldnt seem to put it in words. Thanks for your comment man.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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ok, guess u guys dont like it or are just taking ur time...or maybe u just dont wanna post nething bc ive posted so much...i dont blame you...ill hold off a few weeks before posting my new one i wrote today. sorry.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@bonzai_man)
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Don't hold off posting your songs just b/c few people posted on this one. You've got a great talent and I really like reading the lyrics to your songs.
Keep up the great work.


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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alright, thanks.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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