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help!! I cant think of a chorus a chorus....

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(@lit671)
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Hi,
I just finished writing some music a few hours ago and I had these lyrics that fit pretty good with the music I wrote but I am completely stuck on writing a chorus... I know there is a lot of talent on this site and aby help or criticism would be apreciated. Thanks

How do we make it work?
How do we make it right?
How do I say these things, so we don't end up in a fight?

When will it all go back?
When will it be ok?
When will you look at me, and feel the same way?

Chorus: Heres were you guys come in..... :-)

Why do you even stay?
Why do I even try?
Why do you drag it on, come on and tell me goodbye

Where do you go from here?
Where do I hide the pain?
Where do I put the guilt, that makes me feel to blame?

Chorus:??


   
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(@kr2)
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Chorus:
Would all of these questions
And all of these worries
Really matter if I loved you?

or

With all of these questions
And all of these worries
Would you call this love?

It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.


   
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(@bluenotefla)
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With out know how the tune sounds thsi is the fdrist thing that came t mind when i read your words .
How do we make it work?
How do we make it right?
How do I say these things, so we don't end up in a fight?

When will it all go back?
When will it be ok?
When will you look at me, and feel the same way?

Oh do you remember how we use to feel
Or is this what we're left with
Harts cold like Ice Like Steel

Why do you even stay?
Why do I even try?
Why do you drag it on, come on and tell me goodbye

Where do you go from here?
Where do I hide the pain?
Where do I put the guilt, that makes me feel to blame?

Life is not what you did. It's what you are doing.


   
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