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(@snpeden)
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Joined: 19 years ago
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Saying goodbye,
was the easiest part
All the nights,
when I cried ‘cause you'd broken my heart

and watching the street by my house
hoping you
would come back and do things
I knew you wouldn't do
But here's hoping

For so long I wanted you
To come back to me,
Come back come back
And fix everything

But you're gone
You're with her
Like I knew you would be
And I don't ever want you to come back
Come back

And the spell that he's cast
I hope you're happy
it's all that I ask
don't come back to me

it may be human nature
to be so confused
and I wish you good luck
‘cause the problem is you

when she doesn't want you
don't come crawling back
it's your fault you threw out
what you never deserved
to have

and you're gone
all alone
I'm so happy without you
I don't ever want you to come back

~SNP

would love opinions on this, i'm also not sure it gets the meaning across. anything you have to say will be greatly appreciated.

Do not disturb the sleeping dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.


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(@barnabus-rox)
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Joined: 17 years ago
Posts: 2976
 

hi

Here is my little tweeks on your song so far , I didn't think it would be nice to keep going with out your feelings on what I did ..

Saying goodbye,
was the easiest part
All those nights,
I cried ‘from a broken my heart ...

Watching the street from my house
hoping you
would come back
I knew you wouldn't

For so long I wanted you
Wanted you ......to come back
Come back come back
Never dreamed of how much I love you

=====

hilch
/ I am no song writter myself and hope this does not offend

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


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(@zajeb)
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Joined: 16 years ago
Posts: 11
 

ok here is my idea for first line

Saying goodbye,
was the easiest part
All the nights,
with cries from my broken heart

hope u like it


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