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Hows It Gunna Be

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 Gino
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Rejectedagain..............

I'm not criticising you........... Stay cool! :D

Spec K.................. Keep it up!!! :D

I say and write what I'm thinking, then wish I hadnt.
My only redeeming feature is that I'm honest.


   
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(@specialk)
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thanks guys!

Special K


   
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(@rocketgirl)
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SpecialK,

I think this is great. Especially for someone who's 14. Not that age has to be a factor, but, I would hate to tell you what I was doing at 14! :lol:

My only comment would be that there might be too many subjects. Kinda lost me on what you were trying to say. IMO I like chorus' that change but with the verses always changing subjects I find it hard for the chorus to tie the verses together.

Keep up the good work. G. :)


   
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(@specialk)
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I think what i am saying in the song is about how everything is changing in the world, and askign how it will be when im older...

Special K


   
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