Just to hear you say you love me
Just to hear you one more time
Then I will be able to
Rest my head and die
Rest me head and join you
In eternal sleep
Please take me from this existence
the solstice has made me weak
Howdy leftyguitarjoe. Here's a version to consider, with syllable counts:
verse as written:
Just to hear you say you love me =8
Just to hear you one more time =7
Then I will be able to =6
Rest my head and die =5
Rest me head and join you =6
In eternal sleep =5
Please take me from this existence =8
the solstice has made me weak =7
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a suggestion:
Just to hear you say you love me =8
To hear your dear voice one more time =8
For then, I won't have to worry =8
And my dying will be sublime =8
Now let me rest my head and die =8
For the Winter solstice has made me weak =10
Please take me from this existence =8
I'll lie beside you in eternal sleep =10
Kingwood Kowboy
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