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I 'm just a little older then I claim

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BarnaBus RoX

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Topic starter 20/09/2009 9:52 am

I'll state this from the start
I am not some old fart
I 'm just a little older then I claim

Don't you ever call me mister
I'm probably perving on your sister
I'm still young enough to play that game

The waiste line might be wider
An the hair line a little lighter
But I can still pull the chicks where ever I am

An I maybe over forty
That don't mean I can't be naughty
I just do it with a little class

And as I stated this from the start
I am not some old fart
I 'm just a little older then I claim

Cheers
Trev....

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am

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Elecktrablue

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20/09/2009 5:36 pm

Very good. Except that it should be "I'm just a little older THAN I claim".

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BarnaBus RoX

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Topic starter 21/09/2009 1:52 am

Opps

Vic usually picks up my errors :D :D
Yes your totally correct , and I will ensure to right my wrongs :D :D
Thanks for the feed back
Appreciated
Trev...

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am

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Skinny

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21/09/2009 12:30 pm

Mmmmm..."Im just a LOT older than I claim" :D

The second verse is great.

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BarnaBus RoX

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Topic starter 21/09/2009 1:25 pm

Thanks Skinny ....

20 Years isn't really " LOT " is it ?

I would have said it's rather conservative ..LOL

Appreciate the feed back as always

Cheers

Trev..

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am

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Babs22110

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06/05/2010 3:54 pm

Very good song, alot of people are a little older than they claim so i think in a way you are making a statement. Am i correct?

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BarnaBus RoX

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Topic starter 11/07/2010 3:14 am

Your totally right Babs ...
More than you imagine ..he he he
Thanks for the comment

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am

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onesong

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18/08/2010 4:17 am

lol, pretty cool. I haven't figgured out yet if I am an "old fart" or if i'm just a little older than I claim? I guess it doesn't matter, i'm young enough to enjoy this song and old enough to wonder if it could have been about me. I like it.

Take care,
jody

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MarcMM

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26/11/2010 2:05 pm

Hehe, great song!

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