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(@mig12)
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Kristy by Miguel Vazquez

Kristy
Is it lust or is it love?
Cry it from the heavens above.
Oooh sweet Kristy.

Now Wait!
Will you take the bait?
or will you just watch,
and hope

Kristy
Maybe she'll be mine.
If not, will I be fine?
Ohohoh My Kristy.....

AH MULES 8TH GRADE DISTRICT CHAMPS!

I (heart) my Fender.


   
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(@gmilam)
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Good start Mig!

I'd like you to expand it though and tell us what makes Kristy so awesome!

her long brown hair you can't get out of your head?
her deep blue eyes that make your cheeks turn red?

tell us about this babe!

I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)


   
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(@florence)
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I agree witrh Gmilan- Its a great beginning but needs a bit more meat how about something like this-

Kristy, oh kristy dear
Is it lust or love from you I fear
Your dark brown eyes and your rosy lips
Touch me to my fingertips and I know I'm in love
Cry it from the heavens above.
Oooh sweet Kristy.

Now Kristy darling I await
To see if you will you take my bait?
Or will your sweet lips never say the words
That I am waiting for, cause I know I'm in love
Cry it from the heaavens above
Ooh sweet Kristy

Kristy, Kristy will you be mine
Did you want more than a valentine
Did I say and do the wrong thing
Cause you know I wrote this song and sing
For you my Kristy cause I know I'm in love
Cry it from the heavens above
ooh sweet kristy

If you dont like it bin it! And sorry, dont want to intefere too much but my hands couldnt stop!

Kristy by Miguel Vazquez

Kristy
Is it lust or is it love?
Cry it from the heavens above.
Oooh sweet Kristy.

Now Wait!
Will you take the bait?
or will you just watch,
and hope

Kristy
Maybe she'll be mine.
If not, will I be fine?
Ohohoh My Kristy.....
Kristy, Kristy will you be mine
Did you want more than a valentine
Did I say and do the wrong thing
Cause you know I wrote this song and sing
For you my Kristy cause I know I'm in love


   
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(@mig12)
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Joined: 21 years ago
Posts: 11
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Hey!

Thanks Guys!

This is actually my first big songwriting project, and I had a hell of a time writing it, but I'm gonna go think about it more.

BTW, Florence, that was crazy-awesome!!

AH MULES 8TH GRADE DISTRICT CHAMPS!

I (heart) my Fender.


   
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(@gmilam)
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Joined: 20 years ago
Posts: 159
 

Wow Flo!

You really ran with some ideas there.

Good stuff!

Mig...just remember, we only offer suggestions out of love...never any egos around here.

Hopefully we sparked some ideas for ya!

Keep up the writing....

BTW...my wife's name is spelled K-R-I-S-T-I. I'm glad it's different, otherwise I might of thought you were talking about her. THen we'd have to have a different discussion :evil: :D

I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)


   
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