well - it's just gone 4AM, looked at my rapidly diminishing supply of booze and thought.....
Last Mouthful.
There's a mouthful left at the bottom of the bottle,
But it won't be there much longer,
And with every single sip I take,
the addiction grows so much stronger,
It's 4AM and I can't close my eyes,
Could I be any more wrong, yeah?
Well the bottle's been my friend a long time,
Through the good times and the bad,
And I'd hate to know how much I've spent,
Over the years, I'd go mad,
But I'd give my last penny right now for a drink,
To stop me from feeling sad.
Sometimes it makes me feel so good,
So loud and proud and jolly,
But when the drink's all gone and I'm home alone,
And I feel so melancholy,
When I'm drinking I feel so goddam good,
And I just can't see my folly....
There's a mouthful left at the bottom of the bottle,
But it won't be there much longer,
And with every single sip I take,
the addiction grows so much stronger,
It's 4AM and I can't close my eyes,
Could I be any more wrong, yeah?
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I know this needs a bit of work - but it might make a good blues tune with a bit of work.....
:D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Hi Vic
Yep been there done that doing it now but its' not 4 am ..
I did struggle with some lines but like you said it needs a little work , but the bones are strong in here ...
Maybe a little harmonica solo 1/2 way through I am hearing ,
Good start mate
Trevor
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
hey Vic good lyrics just a couple things that stuck out to me I put in my thoughts hope they can help
:wink: mystic
Last Mouthful
There's a mouthful left at the bottom of the bottle,
But it won't be there much longer,
And with every single sip I take,
the addiction grows so much stronger,
It's 4AM and I can't close my eyes,
Could I be any more wrong, yeah?
Well the bottle's been my friend a long time,
Through the good times and the bad,
And I'd hate to know how much I've spent,
Over the years, I'd go mad,
But I'd give my last penny right now for a drink,
To stop me from feeling sad.
Sometimes it makes me feel so good,
So loud and proud and jolly, >>>I kinda stumbled here>>> :idea: I talk to loud enjoy the crowed
But when the drink's all gone and I'm home alone,
I feel the blues coming over me
And I feel so melancholy,
When I'm drinking I feel so goddam good, >>>I think I would change drinking to sipping from the bottle
And I just can't see my folly....
There's a mouthful left at the bottom of the bottle,
But it won't be there much longer,
And with every single sip I take,
the addiction grows so much stronger,
It's 4AM and I can't close my eyes,
Could I be any more wrong, yeah?
________________________________
I know this needs a bit of work - but it might make a good blues tune with a bit of work.....
