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Marylou is Manic

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(@nitetrapper)
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She stumbles down the hallway
And wears a smile today
No shoes to warm her feet
Last night they locked them away

Stands four feet from the window
Asks for a cigeratte
Its ten minutes to early
They won't give her one yet

Marylou is Manic
Most times she cries at night
Marylou is manic
Seems everyday is a fight
If she could see herself inside
She'd see a woman so alive
Each time they pry she panics
Sweet Marylou is manic

She stands in line in front of me
Wait for the nurse to unlock the door
Step onto the ten by ten mesh metal cage
Have a smoke on the ice cold concrete floor

She always follows the schedule
The staff says shes ready to go
Theres no one there to pick her up
Still her eyes are aglow.

Marylou is Manic
Most times she cries at night
Marylou is manic
Seems everyday is a fight
If she could see herself inside
She'd see a woman so alive
Each time they pry she panics
Sweet Marylou is manic

Mary lou missed her appointment
Just dissapeared with no trace
She was last seen by the ore docks
With a smile on her face

God loves all his children. Whos to say who is right?
My few days with Marylou.Shurley shown me the light.

Marylou is Manic
Most times she cries at night
Marylou is manic
Seems everyday is a fight
If she could see herself inside
She'd see a woman so alive
Each time they pry she panics
Sweet Marylou is manic

Sweet Maylou is Manic

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(@mezlay)
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I'm lovin it. It's awesome really enjoyed reading it keep it up. make it into a song it'll be great.


   
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(@nitetrapper)
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Thanks for the input. Glad you liked it. Nite...............

lyrics belong in songs, poems bolong in bookstores


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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great lyrics I like your style and ya I think it could be a radio song :)


   
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