hey guys, i havent posted anythign here in MONTHS!
i wrote this last night, it took me 10 minutes (seriously) and i recorded it so i wouldnt forget how it went...so the recordings bad...but it really makes the words mean more
Morphine
The start of a new year and I'm already under a cloud
I'm hitting rock bottom but that's ok I'm on solid ground
And I felt the walls closing in, the anger within and I knew,
it was time to get out
I really couldn't wait, another single day to find another way to break it off
And now were here…oh god were here…
And I can't stand to see you cry
But I've been wondering why the hell I'm even doing this,
Tonight its time to be a man
There's nothing I can do to change it,
And there's nothing I can say to make it better
I guess were learning all the time
I wonder if the futures kinder, holds more than painful reminders,
Of the things we'd rather wash away
Its not like I'm mourning what I have now,
It's more like I'm missing what I had then
I really couldn't wait, another single day to find another way to break it off
And now were here…oh god were here…
And I can't stand to see you cry
But I've been wondering why the hell I'm even doing this,
Tonight its time to be a man
Did my words hurt you yeah?
Well baby they weren't supposed to
I was damaged bleeding and I met you
You kept coming back, I kept hoping that
One day you'd see
I only need you so bad, ‘cause you're my morphine…
I really couldn't wait, another single day to find another way to break it off
And now were here…oh god were here…
And I can't stand to see you cry
But I've been wondering why the hell I'm even doing this,
Tonight its time to be a man…
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=6011796&q=hi
(now i feel like im helping the forum again :P i felt bad not posting...)
haRRy
link doesn't work
It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.
damn it! it worked when i checked it after posting...must have been cause i was signed in...
I love it man that is awsome :D :D :D :D
iv been aiming at making the songs catchy and enjoyable to listen to as well as focussing on the words, this is the first 'acoustic' styled song iv written in a while now.
:D That was awesome, I liked it alot, the words were great
thanks all :D
what did you think of the last verse/bridge thing? im not really happy with it myslef (in terms of how it sounds) the words there kind of explain the song though
man i love this song, the music, the words, evereything. and you have got a great voice. i personally like the last part just fine. you should make a myspace page and put your msuic on it for more people to enjoy.
“For all sad words of tongue and pen, The saddest are these, 'It might have been'.” -John Greenleaf Whittier
Damnit I wish I had sound.
I love the lyrics. Makes me want to go write some more, try new patterns.
I love love love love love this part:
Its not like I'm mourning what I have now,
It's more like I'm missing what I had then
Not only is it relateable for those of us who have broken hearts, but had our hearts broken. Been lost on what was suppose to be a straight path. Thanks for sharing it.
I swear one day I must listen.
I know it wasn't reason,
That made me do what wasn't right
but sometimes my heart falls prone
to the nature of your spite.