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I wrote this song in my head on a long car ride home (we'll just leave it at that) Yes this is a heavier song just like everything I post on here. Think kinda like a Stone Sour feel to it. PLease leave a reply and thanx for your time.

My dreams fade into Reality

I felt the human in me dying off
Can you explain this?
Can you resurrect my?
I see the ones I love slowing cut off
Why can't you stop this?
Why can't my sanity be whole?

Again I'm washing ashore
In my own dreams
Not knowing for sure
If it's me that screams
My body has stood the test of time
Yet my soul has bled through every rhyme

I ripped apart the knowledge holding me back
Can you explain this?
Can you resurrect my whole?
I stared in my own eyes reflecting on every fact
Why does this happen?
Why can't my sanity be whole?

Again I'm washing ashore
In my own dreams
Not knowing for sure
If it's me that screams
My body has stood the test of time
Yet my soul has bled through every rhyme

I consecrate the demons in my own head
It's getting brighter
Somehow I'm getting better
I laugh at my reflection as it slowly fades away
Can you explain this?
What the fuck has happened to me?

The pain in my own side
In it the hate confides
Another dream washed away in my waking hour
I'm surprised I'm still here
Now I hold my sins near
My life still feels empty without you by my side.

Again I'm washing ashore
In my own dreams
Not knowing for sure
If it's me that screams
My body has stood the test of time
Yet my soul has bled through every rhyme

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it's good, I think you should do some organizeing to work with the flow...but besides for that...Good job :)

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(@diluted_metal)
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I like the song, its pretty good, when you say it's got a stone sour feel to it, which song are you talking about? or is it just the overall band sound of stone sour?

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 spug
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it has the stone sour feel to it. like melodic metal type stuff.

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