This song is goes to the tune of the song "Come Clarity" by the band In Flames. I would appreciate some comments, thanx.
My Heart Spilled Before the Eyes of The Crows
I can die
a million times
But none of these have crossed my fears
So when you came
and jumped my heart
The downward spiral was about to start
You believe that you saved me,
but when you wake up my eyes are still not there
When you cried I thought you left me
Still the pain it always lingers near
My soul has died
A million times
Spreads like cancer killing all it finds
Time after time
My shadow watched
Leaving you to add the final touch
You believe that you saved me,
but when you wake up my eyes are still not there
When you cried I thought you left me
Still the pain it always lingers near
Falling down without a way to get back up
I'm staggering
Lost under an anomaly
Forever changing with the wind
Blowing skies across a demons heart
And now my pride
Stabbed time after time
Swallowed hard to keep you at my side
But when you stole
My lasting life
I shed a one tear then faded away
You believe that you saved me,
but when you wake up my eyes are still not there
When you cried I thought you left me
Still the pain it always lingers near
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Thats killer. Great imagery and stuff. Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
That song is a killer one, i listend to the song while reading your lyrics to it, pretty damn good. keep it up!
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thanx guys for feedback. Metal heads gotta stick together on here ya know.
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