i need some help pulling this together into a song, if anyone has any ideas....or if you think it's not pullable into a song, lemme know that, too.
From the shattered glass
of the distant past
comes today with all its glory
and sorrow
the lazy mind
the tired aching body
the house, the car, the cats
the no time left
the no money, right?
the rich go to rehab
the poor get old young
the ones in the middle
read all the books
that tell them how to learn
learn how to eat
don't eat that meat
learn how to deal
learn how to feel
Hey, I'd love to work on this with you. Give me a day or so and I will try to get something back to you.
Does that work for you?
Teamwork- A few harmless flakes working together can unleash an avalanche of destruction.
yep. glad to hear from you. thanks.
How about something like this:
Shards of shattered glass
Most, the days of a distant past
And the one that is today
Broken like the rest
Faintly reflects this life
The weary mind spent
The aching body bent
the house, the car, the cats
the no time left
and even less money, right?
the rich go to rehab
the poor get old young
While those in between
Read all sorts of books
So they may learn
Learn what to eat
Like not to eat meat
learn how to deal
learn how to feel
Learn how not to show it
It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.
ummm . . . You're welcome.
It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.
